Publisher: Simon Pulse
Release date: January 26, 2016
Format: Hardcover
Source: Purchased
Pages: 320
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Few things come as naturally to Harper as epic mistakes. In the past year, she was kicked off the swim team, earned a reputation as Carson High’s easiest hookup, and officially became the black sheep of the family. But the worst mistake was her first one: destroying her relationship with her best friend, Declan.
Now, after two semesters of silence between Harper and Declan, Declan is home from boarding school for summer break. Everything about him is different – he’s taller, stronger… handsomer. But Harper has changed too, especially in the wake of her mom’s cancer diagnosis.
While Declan wants nothing to do with Harper, he’s still Declan, her Declan, the only person she wants to talk to about what’s really going on with her. But after she betrayed his trust, he’s also the one person she’s lost all right to seek comfort from.
As shared friends and shared histories draw them together, Harper and Declan must decide which parts of their past are still possible to fix and which parts they’ll have to live with forever.
MY THOUGHTS
The Year We Fell Apart is Emily Martin’s debut novel and I dove straight into this one as soon as my copy arrived in the mail because it reminded me of Second Chance Summer (which I loved), with the second chance romance and the parent struggling with cancer. Unfortunately, I didn’t love this one as much as Second Chance Summer because of a few problems I had with the characters and plot.
For a debut novel, I was quite impressed with the writing in this book. I noticed from the first page how beautiful the prose was but, most importantly, it was easy to read. The words flowed very well and I flew through this book in just one sitting.
What I really struggled with was Harper’s character. She was very frustrating and I didn’t really understand her behaviour and her reasoning behind most of the things she did. I feel like this book had the potential to be a great coming of age story, but Harper really didn’t develop very much and continued to make the same mistakes over and over. She really reminded me of Molly from 99 Days, another character that just continued to make the same mistakes and never grew or learnt anything from her mistakes. Perhaps my biggest problem with Harper was that she was very mopey and her attitude just made her a little bit hard to like. She kept putting herself into situations where she would make the same mistakes she had in the past, but in the aftermath, she would act like it wasn’t her fault at all. I just could not bring myself to feel sorry for her. Having said that, it wasn’t all bad when it came to Harper. She had a few great moments and she was far less annoying than Molly from 99 Days.
“People change. And sometimes that means drifting apart. But other times it just means working harder to find some common ground.”
I thought the events that led to Molly and Declan breaking up a year ago were a little bit overdramatic and weak. I don’t even fully understand why they broke up. And for those events to have caused such a huge change in Harper, it was slightly unrealistic to me. And despite the two of them being together in the same place again, they never really communicated with each other. There were just so many misunderstandings and I just wished they would talk to each other. There were even instances where one character was given the opportunity to explain their actions, and the other just said “nope, you don’t have to explain”. I reached the end of the book feeling very unsatisfied with how everything played out and I don’t think their issues were resolved at all.
The romance between Harper and Declan is definitely at the forefront of the book, but there is a secondary story arc that involves Harper’s mother and her struggles with cancer. In my opinion, this was dealt with so poorly that I have no idea why it was even included in the book. I suppose watching her mother become ill was supposed to snap Harper out of her recklessness, but there was so little development in Harper’s character! In fact, for most of the book, Harper just avoids the issue by lying to her parents and going out and being reckless. There also aren’t very many mentions of Harper’s mother in the whole book so I just thought that story arc was a bit weak. It also felt kind of convenient at times and it seemed like her illness was only mentioned when the plot needed to move forward. There were also a couple of other things that felt convenient, such as the photography summer class Harper attended. It was only brought up a handful of times when the plot needed to develop.
I did like some of the side characters in the book. I appreciated how supportive some of Harper’s friends were and wished that they could have featured a bit more in the book. However, there were also other friends that I was absolutely disgusted by and thought were terrible people. I was a little bit disappointed by how Harper handled these friendships. I just wanted to see her cut ties with them completely but that didn’t really happen. I liked Declan as a love interest but he did some really stupid things that just didn’t make sense to me, so overall I was a little bit underwhelmed by the two leads.
This was a little bit of an underwhelming read for me. I didn’t love Harper as a main character and thought that there were a lot of loose ends that weren’t tied up. The plot felt a bit shaky at times and I just needed it to be better resolved. It had great drama but I thought it was a bit overdramatic, especially since the catalyst was so… not worthy of drama.
Great review! I’ve been debating on whether or not to pick this up. 🙂
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It was a nice quick read but also super frustrating! It’s probably not one that you’d reread so maybe see if you can get it from the library if you’re interested?
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That would work well! I go to the library all the time. 🙂
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Great review! I have this one on my to-buy list, but I’m wondering if I should make it a library read instead. I don’t like to take chances on buying this for my shelf if I’ll end up not wanting to reread it later on.
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Yeah this isn’t one that I’d ever reread so I think you should definitely make it a library read! It’s a very nice hardcover and looks really pretty on my shelf but… not really worth the money.
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I really need to connect to the main character to stay invested in a story, especially if they’re contemporaries, so I’ll probably stay away from this book. Also very disappointing to hear that her mother and the battle with cancer was not fully fleshed out – as that probably deserves more attention than the romance?
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Yeah I thought the mother’s battle with cancer would be a pretty big part of the story but it wasn’t… which is disappointing because it could have been the impetus for a lot of character development in the MC. I was just to frustrated with the MC! She just would not stop going to parties and drinking and losing control… even though she knew that was the cause of all her problems…
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There’s nothing worse than not being able to connect to the main character and I am particularly disappointed in the fact that she doesn’t learn from her mistakes. The fact that her mother’s cancer is mainly used as a plot device does not make me want to pick up this book. I feel like if you’re going to include that element it needs to be fleshed out.
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Exactly! I think her mother’s battle with cancer was definitely intended to make the MC grow up, but I’m super disappointed that nothing really came out of it. It also wasn’t resolved very well – it was kinda open-ended, which I guess is fine, but it meant that the whole story arc felt super unnecessary. I was so frustrated with the MC in this book because she knew what her problems were but continued to put herself into situations where the same problems/mistakes would arise. *heavy sigh*
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I’m bummed you didn’t love it — especially if the MC was irritating. I have it waiting to read from the library.
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Getting it from the library is a great idea. It’s definitely a beautiful book that I’m happy to have on my shelves but it’s highly unlikely that I’ll read it again. Hope you enjoy the characters a bit more than I did!
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Great review. this is in my tbr, my I’ll admit that it’s mostly because of that gorgeous cover 😉
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It is such a beautiful cover! Just a bit bummed that the plot and characters weren’t as beautiful 😦
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that always sucks =/, covers can be so deceiving 😦
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Sorry to hear this wasn’t as good as Second Chance Summer. I personally think that authors should explore difficult topics (like cancer) and not use them as a way to move plot. Also I think I would have issues with drama. Great review, Jenna!
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Yeah, it was super disappointing that her mother’s cancer battle was just used as a plot device. It wasn’t resolved very well either, though I can see why the author made it an open-ended. I just don’t feel super satisfied with it.
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